21 March 2014 @ 03:08 am
BaCC in Widespot: Round 2 - Hart  
Hart-_R2-2
CreMo goal met!


Jam-packed so let's get to it!




B0-0
Rhett was not shy about broadcasting how Penny had turned him down cold.
He was more impressed by himself for asking in first place!

He didn't want to be married so it was kind of a relief. But he still wanted credit.
Rhett painted a picture for his friend, it got more elaborate the second or third time over.
"And there I was, down on bended knee mind you..."
B0-1
Mary didn't want to interrupt but she couldn't help saying, "maybe the baby...?"

"What about her? Ain't that the whole point of gettin' married, it was for her and the baby I asked!"

"Not Una. The, um, the other one."

"That's right," Junior chimed in, "with two of them now," he emphasised with his fingers, "two babies and they're not both hers, it's a tough call."

Rhett should've pointed out that his position wasn't all that different, no matter what line he'd fed is wife. Lookin' at Mary, Candy must've
had that baby months ago, before Proxy was even born, but lookin' at Mary all he saw was Mary. He didn't think of that other stuff 'til later.

"Penny's a mother now," Mary said, "she only wants the best for her baby."

"And I ain't the best?"

"I, I didn't say that, Rhett."

B0-2
Nah, it was okay. Maybe she's right? He didn't wanna settle down and come home to one wife every damn day.
But if it works for Junior more power to him.


B0-3
"Kinda early for you, ain't it?"

"Got the afternoon off."

The boy didn't look worried but what did that signify? "Just you?"

B0-4
"Don't worry. I'm still gettin' paid for the day. I asked when she called up."

Val didn't have time for suspicions, he saw where Rhett was coming in from
and he had to know, "How's everything goin' over there? Mary's happy?"

B0-5
"Happy, sure. Junior's been keepin' her busy!" Rhett laughed. "Don't look like she'll be comin' to tend to us anymore.
Not no time soon, anyway. It's too bad cuz we sure could use a woman's touch around here, am-I-right, Pop!"

Val wasn't sure just how much Rhett knew or he woulda Pop-ped him for talking reckless. Smart ass.


B0-6
Goldie overheard their conversation and the main thing that was bothering her, that she didn't understand was how
Rhett could still be friends with Junior. What about Candy? Goldie liked Mary—she loved Mary—but what about Candy?

"What about her? She ain't with Junior. So why should we hold it against him cuz she skipped?"

"But where else would she go? Isn't it his baby?"

"He don't want Mary and his mama to know but, yeah, could be. Or could be...anybody's. Big sis got a way of lookin' out for number one.
And worryin' about somebody when ain't nothin' wrong only makes you feel stupid. Nobody ever asked me but my money's on her sittin' her
fat ass on a crazy big pile o' cash, waitin' for some dumb ol' fart to kick off and leave it all to her and that kid she must've had by now."

Goldie wasn't so sure about the likelihood of Rhett's scenario but she knew there was a whole lot she didn't know.
Still, she felt the need to defend her sister the only way she could. "Candy's not fat."

"Details, kiddo."


~


B0-7
School is going better for Goldie but she's still kinda short on friends.
She didn't go straight home today and she ran into the stray pooch again. He can be her friend!


B0-8
David sneaks away from his job as often as he can, the money's okay but standing around seeing only old people or no people? No thanks.
He'd rather go explore around town, figured he'd run into Viola but she's not who he found! David had never paid much attention to Goldie.
How did that happen?


B0-9
Widespot was supposedly a dry county when Valentine moved here.
He didn't touch a drop for the longest, lost the taste, but after the day he's had...well, he'll learn again.


B1-0
David was so easy to talk to, it didn't take long for Goldie to open up and he quickly
realised there was a lot more to the shy girl who sat in the back of class all the time.

*Look at that happy face!*

B1-1
She was even funny! Those stories she told...her family sounds like a riot.


B1-2
Nobody's heard anything bad to do with the truckers and others passing through but Goldie was still under strict orders
not to be alone out this way after dark. She wasn't technically alone but she knew she should be getting home.

David volunteered to walk her.

B1-3

B1-4

B1-5
She had no trouble getting Poochie to come along and her Pop had hinted that she could keep him.

"So this is your house then..."

"Oh, yeah, this is it. Thanks for..." she got flustered, she didn't know what to say. Thanks for walking her? Thanks for talking to her?

B1-6
"Anytime. See you later, Goldie," he said, giving her a friendly peck on the cheek.

Goldie turned to hurry inside when he walked away, she knew it wasn't a big deal but she felt flushed all over, she didn't want anyone to see.
Unfortunately, her pooch pal didn't follow, she opened the door and tried to call him in and he took off running. Maybe he'd rather go with David?


B1-7
Expecting snow, Valentine? (Not very likely during this round.)
Perhaps he was checking for secret signals from Lana's bedroom window (or from someone else who lives in that house).


B2-0
Goldie didn't want to let her grades slip again, her Pop didn't nag her about it but she didn't ever want to disappoint him.

Rhett had his favourite picture in his room but Goldie wasn't sure what to do with Candy yet.
She'd started sifting through them for a kinda Candy collage but it wasn't finished, it needed something.

B2-1
She went out walking around looking inspiration, interesting scenes to capture with Ma's old camera Pop gave her.


David was running an errand to the post office for his own mom. It's only a hop-skip, (that's their new house back there)
she coulda sent Sharla, but she gets distracted too easy. Might actually find some way to come back with magic beans.

B2-2
Not that David wasn't distractable. When he saw Goldie again that was the end of his errand.

"You wanna hang out for a while? Maybe take a walk with me?"

B2-3
Their walk ended up at the Makeout Spot. (Because where else would they go?)


B2-4
David was loads of fun to be around. Kinda touchy-feely...but she didn't mind.


B2-5
He was also willing to strike a pose the second she suggested it, no shyness about him but he wasn't overwhelming either, he was great.

Penny thought it was great, too, that Goldie was out having fun. And with her future step-nephew as she liked to joke. She gave David the
thumbs-up, he could do a lot worse. But so could Goldie. Penny saw the bond he and Dora had, he was a good kid. She left them to it.


B2-7
Autonomous cleaning, Rhett? Whatever could be the occasion?

*I find it hilarious that he only does this when his baby mamas are around or expected.*

B2-8
Valentine saw to the door while Rhett was busy.

He was polite, of course, but not very—not very charming. Sandy had never considered what he must think of her! She presumed on his reputation but, yes,
Rhett is his son. And she and Proxima were a complication he didn't need, was too young to handle...well, and she was old enough to have known better.

B2-9
'What are we doing here, Proxy?'


B2-10
"Thanks Pop," Rhett said when Val passed by him to (autonomously!) take out the trash.

"Your guests are here," he told him.


B2-11
"I like you a lot, Goldie. I was just wonderin' if—"

B2-12
Yes, she liked him, too.


B2-13
Dixie and Scot weren't getting along great, ever since right before Mary's wedding when they disagreed about inappropriate
behaviour for girls. It only got worse the next time they talked. They were fine with friends or their parents as a buffer
but for the first time ever Dixie really thought her brother was a moron. So she took to spending more time with the other one.


"What the—!" (River followed in silence. Dixie was full of surprises. Sometimes the only thing to do was watch.)
B2-14

B2-15

B2-16

B2-17

B2-18
Heels, what heels? Dixie had, had lunged at her! If David hadn't jumped in and caught her...(Feets don't fail me now!) Goldie didn't have time for
sidewalks either, she identified a direct line to her house and she made a run for it, hurdling tree stumps as she went if they got in her way to safety.


B3-0
She took care to calm herself before she walked through the door, though. Couldn't let Rhett or Pop get wind of
anything wrong. They were too overprotective as it was. But there was another surprise in store for her. A good one.


B3-1
She was drawn magnetically to the baby. "Can I hold her?" she asked Sandy who handed her over.

"Name's Proxy," Rhett chimed in as he played proud papa...but she already knew that, he told them when Proxy was first born.


B3-2
Goldie was over at the Weiss house for school everyday so she got to see Una more than any of 'em
but this is the first time Val saw her interacting with a baby. Clearly, she was already smitten.


B3-3
"Now then. Let's have a look at you."
He wasn't sure if there was any hope for that button-nose but she was a Hart, name and all, and there it was.


B3-4

B3-5
This was not a good time to talk, not with Sandy over the house.

"Hey Ma," Rhett whispered, "look what I did!"


B3-6
David didn't put Dixie down until he was sure Goldie was in the clear. That brother of hers
wasn't much help when she was kneeing and kicking at him to get down, that's for sure.
(In River's defense, he's bigger now but not that big yet, he didn't know what to do but stand around looking confused.)

But Dixie didn't chase after Goldie so what was the problem, why was he still followin' them?

"Why are you so angry? I don't want you to be mad at me."

"You're fickle as fuck. And shal-low."

"How am I shallow?

"Uh, can you say Goldie Hart. Goldie Hart. And, oh yeah, Goldie Hart."
B3-7
(River discreetly left them to it.)

"See. I knew it. It's not me that you like, it's her you don't like."

"Nope.

"Okay. But I do. A lot, actually. Does that have to be a problem?"

"Whatever dude. Like I can't tell what you like so much about her."

"She's funny and nice and pretty—"

"And she's a Hart, don't forget that part."

"I don't even know what that means."

But Dixie didn't wanna get into it. She let the silence shift the tension but then she broke it, saying, "Hey, I'm nice!"

"Oh, you're the nicest, Dix...I think I'm gonna have bruises from your damn boots."
B3-8
They both laughed at that.
"So...yo, there's a pig on the sidewalk. Can I just point that out for a minute—how weird is that?"

"It's fine."

"But shouldn't it be fenced up or something?"

"Don't worry about the freakin' pig, all right. This is Widespot. It's fine."

"If you say so. Man, Sharla would be all over that thing if she saw it. You'd never get your pig back."

"Who said it was my pig?"

"Nobody, I guess, but there's like three more right there by your house
. See."

Dixie sighed. "Why don't you go chase after your new girl then? You won't have to see this kinda thing on that side o' town."


B3-9
Junior strolled by, heading home, but he paused when he saw his sister-in-law goin' in on that poor kid.

"Everything okay here, Dixie?"

"Yeah, Junior. We're fine." Dixie didn't think she was wrong about him and Mary—and she wasn't gonna admit it if she
was cuz Scot was more wrong—but she didn't really warm to him like she thought she would since they been married.

"Jus' checkin'. You know this pig on the sidewalk, kinda in the way. You might wanna—"

Dixie stormed off. Why was everybody going on about the dang pig?
Just cuz her name was Land did not mean she knew what to do about the pig!

Are we cool?" David called after her.

"Yeah!" she shouted back. It sounded kinda very angry but he'll take it.



B4-0
Warmed over spaghetti is still the best meal Sandy's had in a long time. She couldn't waste money on luxuries like
butter, she realised. She had to learn to save, for her and Proxy's future, and since she wasn't pregnant anymore and nursing
didn't work out for her, she could stint herself sometimes if it meant a few more simoleons for the 'get out of purgatory' tin.


B4-1
Shortly after dinner Sandy collected Proxy and got ready to go.

"You sure you don't wanna, I don't know, stay the night or somethin'?"

"Positive. We've got to go home."

B4-2
But, baby, it's cold outside.

B4-3
Goldie heard a scratching at the door.

"Poochie! You cold, boy? Come on in, poor baby."

B4-4
"Goldie."


B4-5
"What are you doin' here?"

"I wanted to see if you're okay. I fixed things up with Dixie—"

B4-6
"What do you mean? How do you fix cheating on her? You didn't fix it with me. You didn't tell me you were goin' out with her."

"I'm not."

"She already didn't like me and now she hates me! And Scot's prolly gonna hate me now. And Virgie!"

(The woes of an unpopular popularity sim. He wouldn't understand. Goldie's big want was and is to be friends with Virginia.)

"It's not like that. And nobody hates you."

"You didn't see her face. And you're not the one who had to run away! She wasn't after you."

"Okay. But to be honest, Goldie, I'm pretty sure you could take her," he said,
"If you had to...You know...Sorry. Guess that's not what you want to hear."

"No. I think you should go."

B4-7

B4-8
"Look, Poochie came back. It's so cold out there—can he stay?"

"The dog, yes. But that boy you're gonna have to send back to whoever he belongs to."

"Pop."
She didn't think he overheard but she felt like that's kinda what she did already. Sent David away. Back to Dixie maybe.

"Who is he anyway?"

"Um. David Ottomas."

"Ottomas? Right. Well, we don't need no more strays sniffin' 'round here. I mean it,
Goldie. No company. And get the dog here a real name. Poochie ain't gonna cut it."


B4-10
What a long day for Goldie! She found a boy and lost him.
And the dog she lost the other day was found again...

~

B4-11
*Daytona left the sound system, a proper woohoo thank you, which was promptly sold because they already have one.
David left the flamingo for Goldie, which somehow seems like a really cute gift so she's keeping it.*


~

B4-12
In the morning, Goldie found and designated a place for her bird. She liked pink and she liked animals.
It was exotic and, well, weird and it made her heart beat faster thinking about what it might mean.


B5-0
"Whoa. Guess we got a dog."


B5-1
"What's your name, buddy?"

"Ain't got one yet." Val said, heading for the stairs. Bonding with the dog wasn't on his agenda.
But it was still better than that old cat Candy had. Prettiest little thing but mean.


B5-2
"Lana? No, no, don't think I'll be able to swing that today...Little busy that's all," Valentine lied, "How 'bout I give
you a call later, hun...Now that does sound—but another time...Oh no, I definitely won't forget. All right now. Bye-bye."

Like hell! Never again.


B5-3
Mary used to keep their fridge stocked with all sorts of good stuff but they were running on empty now and, while
Goldie didn't mind picking up the slack, she was definitely not going out to the Lands' with Dixie there!


B5-3a
Goldie's resolve not to see him was pretty much gone once she picked up the flamingo with the 'For Goldie' note
on it this morning but there was still the little fact that Dixie had tried to attack her, that couldn't be all for nothing.

She paid for her things and tried to leave without saying anything. Like David was going to let that happen.

"Goldie, wait."

This was awkward, she had to go. But today her legs wouldn't move.

"Poochie! Come on, boy. Now where'd he get to. Oh, hi," she said.

"Did you get my gift? I had a really good time with you yesterday. Even though we didn't get to, uh, finish."

"The flamingo? Yeah, it's...it's pretty and, um, well, it's really unique.
And it matches my room. I like it a lot—do you have any dog food?"

B5-4
"Not here. But we've got some at the house. Our critturs won't touch it."

"You have dogs?"

"We do now. You want the food? Let's go get it."

"But you've got customers."

"What's two minutes? I live right there across the street. Come on," he said, eager to get her alone now that he had the chance.

But Goldie stood firm, she couldn't let him leave with these people here. Plus if his dogs were big they might be mean to Poochie.

"There you are, boy!"
B5-6
It started to snow and David got the bright idea that was enough excuse for him to close up.

B5-7
Then Gran showed up! Even better. He could get her to watch the shop while he ran to the house with Goldie for a minute.

"It's for the dog," he said, "she needs food for him. And Danny and Sarah won't eat it."
David knew Gran would understand!


B6-0
"Here boy, wanna biscuit? It's bacon-flavoured," he said to Goldie, "and the dog chow is Grade A stuff, they just won't touch it."

*If I'd had my wits about me I'd have put them back in their outerwear here. Oh well.*

B6-1
With the Poochie pretence out of the way, David started in on what he really
wanted to get Goldie alone for...and then his mom walked in. Great.

"Hey Mom. This is Goldie. Goldie, that's my mom. And Jim."

"What a pretty name that is. Goldie," Samantha said, thinking like a third-trimester pregnant mother of three boys and two girls.
Goldie Ottomas. Lovely. "I'll be getting out of your way," she said, taking a hint from her son, "It was very nice to meet you, Goldie."

"You, too, Mrs. Ottomas." Goldie's voice quavered a bit with new people.
She turned back to David. "I didn't know you had another little brother."

"And another little sister, too. They're twins. Mom!"

"I'm going, I'm going." Sam didn't mean to linger, it's only that she never
saw him so worked up over one of his girlfriends before. So precious!


B6-2
"And there's another one on the way!"

"Goldie—"

"What's the other twin's name?"

"Tammy-Faye. Goldie, I was—"

"It must be nice to have such a big family around."

"Sure, it's nice. Most of the time. But I don't wanna talk about my family," David said, "I wanna talk about you."

B6-3
He grabbed her hands. "Look, I know what you said but you gotta believe—it's nothin' with
me and Dixie—we're just friends. She's not my girlfriend...I want you to be my girlfriend."

"Really?"

B6-4

B6-5

*And thus a true triple-bolt couple-dom was clumsily begun.*

~


B7-0
Damn dog!

B7-1

B7-2
"You know how much that chair cost? You keep your paws and those chompers off the furniture, y'hear!"

B7-3
Poochie took refuge with his ball and his Goldie.

(Nope, he never did get a real name.)


B7-4
Time for another Hart to Hart with Rhett and his Pop.

"But you said—"

"I know what I said."

"And you were right. I don't want no wife."

"What the—didn't you just go poppin' the question to Penny?"

"That was different. She was mad at me."

Damn it, Rhett. "Okay then, look at it this way. She don't need you. But that other one does.
And you can't afford 'em both—well, I can't afford 'em both. You can't afford neither one of 'em."

"So you're serious?"

"As a heart attack. You didn't tell me she was in such a bad way. But that baby is my blood and I ain't gonna
let her live like that. If you don't go get 'em, I will. But, I'm tellin' you now, if I do it she'll never respect you."


B7-5
Valentine gave him a day to think it over, this was gonna change the boy's life, all their lives. He couldn't blame him
for draggin' his feet. Couldn't' blame him for wantin' to get out of the house and whoop it up while he could either.


B7-6
"Come on if you're comin'."


B8-0
Rhett has been trying to convince him to take him on at The Dugout but that won't help their bottom-line none.
It didn't half cover his baby-making expenses but at least workin' for Daytona enabled him to make some
kinda contribution. And Val sure as hell didn't need him underfoot 24/7. Still, he agreed to let him tag along tonight.


B8-1

B8-2

B8-3
Rhett was on bar, yakkin' it up with Ottomas and his wife when Val spotted him and came over.

"You're Valentine Hart! Man, I am your biggest fan!"

"That right? Well, it's always nice to meet a fan. I been retired quite some time now."

"You're a legend. I covered your Hall of Fame induction. I was a sports journalist for The Times, once upon a whenever. Man. Valentine Hart! When my
ma told me you were in Widespot I didn't half believe her. And then when I found out you ran this place, I had to come check it out with the missus."

"That your wife there? Pleasure to meet you, Mrs. Ottomas," Val said, stepping over to Samantha, "My son here makes a mean virgin piña colada if you're so inclined."

"Why, thank you. I think I will. What do you think, Pete?"

"Oh, yeah, honey, sure. If you want."

"So tell me, what do you think, Pete? Of The Dugout, I mean. We're startin' to generate some buzz and with spring around the corner I might need some
help once we open up the gift shop and the party deck upstairs if the tourists start flockin' in like a friend o' mine is predictin'. It ain't journalism but..."

"Say the word and I'm your guy!"


*Okay, so he won't hire Rhett but he might hire Peter.*

B8-4
*Here's one reason why walking in now...Rhett's the other.*

Val swaggered over to Daytona, not a little smug about setting up the steal of her MVP.
It wasn't any of his business or anything what she got up to on her own time...but still.

Daytona, however, was convinced it was her business what he did and who with. She came out tonight to stake her claim,
on the lookout for Lana Mann. She didn't concern herself with Peter or anybody else, if she even noticed him (with his wife).



When they got back to hers, she blind-sided him in her bedroom.
B8-5
B8-6
"Oh, you're gonna get it now."

"Wait, wait, wait, Mr. World-class Athlete. You're gonna hafta be gentle—Ha-ha! Sucker. Take that!"

They went on for quite a few rounds with the pillows, there was a lot of unspoken stuff they had to resolve.
(And why talk when you can hit and it doesn't even hurt.)

B8-7
After the play-fighting, Valentine grabbed her up in his arms.
"You know how I feel about you, don't you? Time's too precious to waste sweating the distractions."
(In other words, the other folks in their beds.)

B8-8
She was too exhausted to finish what they started but for the first time ever Valentine settled in to stay the night.
It just so happens to be also the first time ever they were together and no woohoo. But this is nice, him and Daytona.


B8-9
Valentine eased out of bed early the next morning. There were kids in this house he didn't
fancy runnin' into and his own kid to get home to. "Day, hun, wake up. I got to go now."


B9-0
Rhett gave some thought to what his Pop said and he was right. He went to see Sandy before work.

"Eyes up here, remember."

"Yeah, nah, it just...looks like they shrank or somethin' since the baby."

"Rhett!"

"Nah, it's nothing bad, I love my buddies, it's just the baby days were—"

"Rhett. Focus. Eye contact. Not ogling. We talked about this."


B9-1
"Hello."

"Hello back at ya. You look good from every angle, all's I'm sayin'. Nobody sexy and classy as you
should be livin' in this dump. Definitely not with my kid. So whaddya say we get y'all moved in with us?"

"Are you sure? What about your father?"

Pop told him he'd look better if he did this on his own so Rhett took his advice
and didn't let his Pop be brought into it by her either. "I'm sure," he said.


It wasn't the best proposal she's ever gotten but it was a decent proposition.
B9-2
"What do you think, Proxy? I know it was my idea at first but is it a good one? Should we go?"


B9-3
"Rhett! Did you steal the tweezers?" Sharing a bathroom with siblings was probably not ideal but Goldie never knew any
different. He was always picking stuff up and not putting it back where he got it, that's why Candy hoarded her things. "Rhett?"

He wasn't in. She checked. Goldie was always hesitant about knocking on Pop's
door, just in case...stuff, but she did and he wasn't in either. She was all alone.

B9-4
Ah, but she wasn't all alone, there was Poochie! She's gonna hafta leave him alone, though, gotta get to school.

"No time for breakfast, Poochie, don't tell Pop. But you go on and eat up, that's a good boy."

B9-5
Her boyfriend was waiting to walk her to school.

*Good thing he lives on "this" side of town now. When he lived on the same block as Woody and Dixie would he have walked all the
way over here every morning just to walk back? Funny to think of his girl preference as being a function of location, location, location.*



B9-6
"So, uh, here we are. There's Goldie's room and Candy's room behind you and, uh, my room."


B9-7
"Thanks," Sandy said, heading off for the vacant room.


B9-8
Rhett carried in Proxima's sleeper...thing and Sandy got settled in.
He was relieved she chose Candy's room but surprised.

"I'm late for work so, uh, I gotta get going. You gonna be okay?"

"Of course we will."


B9-9
"Good morning," Val said, coming in from his night with Daytona.

"Good morning," she repeated sheepishly.

Well, wasn't this gonna be awkward as hell.

~






This is quite a Goldie-centric update, mostly because layering the Beeches and Harts meant I couldn't very well show any Goldie/David in Part 1 before David/Dixie/Virgie/Scot in their Part 2 because it did happen afterward; once David noticed Goldie that was it, totally infatuated. It was always my intention to hook them up but I wasn't expecting instant triple bolts, this means regardless of what happens this relationship will stick with them, no forgettable teen fling here. That kind of chemistry will force Goldie to confront the Hart side of her personality and David's instinct to protect her is interesting, his dedication means he'll have to reckon with just how much he's his father's and his mother's son. And, yes, I surely did plop the Critturs in with the Ottomi, as if they weren't chaotic enough!

Dixie's outburst...I could not help myself ;-) With all the running Goldie does with her Pop, though, even without David holding her back, there's no way Dixie could've caught her. Dix is mostly mellow but impetuous and she does not like Goldie, period. It's that thing where she interprets her shyness as snobbishness. She doesn't like Woody either but, as a boy, she reads him differently. His personality + aspiration inspire him to try, and keep missing, so she writes him off as a weirdo. (Of course, having grown up with her always, Mary is just Mary.) But Dixie is pretty easy-going so with the heat of the moment passed, I doubt she'll try to attack Goldie again. Yet she is determined not to like her. For the later scene, well, okay the pig convo is kind of non sequitur. But not entirely. That's where it was and if you 'move objects' them they disappear, until they get good and ready to pop back again, if they do. So there was a pig in the road. It had to be acknowledged! :-D

Sandy's moving in I didn't decide until I played the Harts, that big empty room was bugging me and all my ideas to fill it would be wasted at this point in the story. And once Val met Proxy and realised how they were living he wouldn't be able to hold out. Also, Sandy being romance secondary sort of belongs here, the drama potential is ramped up and, financially, it is actually 'cheaper to keep her'.

The tension-relieving activity alluded to in the last update with Daytona/Val was the pillow-fight, no other activities that night. And as for Rhett's asking who had the baby since Sandy was out and about, it wasn't a question but an accusation. Val had the baby. And he'd had her all day while Sandy was out enjoying her freedom. It's not often he gets the chance so Rhett got up on his high horse about it.

While Val may be off-screen a bit, clearly he's been up to stuff (the Lana convo); Rhett is more what you see is what you get, as far as this update goes. Thanks for reading!


 
 
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[identity profile] peni griffin on March 21st, 2014 12:59 pm (UTC)
Wow, got to this one just in time - the electricity's gonna be off all morning and I wouldn't have had time to read this if I hadn't checked before breakfast. Lots of development here and yay for Goldie even if it does mean rousing Dixie's ire. I know Dixie's mellow but don't forget how low her nice points are - she'll warrant watching, especially given how sensitive Goldie is. Boyfriend and pet in one round - things are looking up for her. Now if somebody'll just think to help her with Mount Homework...and she'll find out what happened to Candy soon, I hope?

Rhett is such a jackass, but I love him so much. And he really is working on it. Presumably Mama spoiled him rotten, but now Pop's not on the road all the time he can be dragged kicking and screaming into adulthood. With Sandy's help. If I had Rhett's bio to write today it'd just say "Mommy issues." The way he interacts with Sandy, the autonomous cleaning when her or Penny's expected, the way he's looking at Mary and her belly - one of the weird things that happens if you move Mary in with the Harts is that she and Rhett have quite a lot of chemistry...And I think you'll be surprised at how good he is with kids if he's living with them. I want to see which picture is his favorite, that he's got up in his room.

That is a weird relationship Val's got going on with Daytona! Weird is good. And it's a lot more equal than the one with Mary, much as I love them as a couple when it happens. (Mary has to bring a layer of tough out from under the nice points to make that work.) So sad Daytona's going to predecease him (unless the player intervenes) and he won't take that well. Fortunately you won't let that happen till it's good for the story, which I trust won't be for a long time yet. I had to let her die in my game because Sandy managed to keep the marriage together, and the only way I could see to advance her character arc was to clear Daytona out of her way.

If Proxy doesn't have a face that's as good as a nametag saying: "Hi! I'm a Hart!" she'll be the first Rhett-Sandy cross I've seen that doesn't. Just a head's up.

So much to love, electricians coming so soon!
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on March 22nd, 2014 02:32 am (UTC)
Glad you got the chance to read it, I laughed my way through writing this one so I was hoping the fun would come across! Attack-Dixie was just the way it had to be, I couldn't help it, but David was right that if push did come to shove Goldie would wipe the floor with her, giving her more reason to distrust 'them quiet ones'. But that would have to be a situation where Goldie has no choice but to defend herself, otherwise she's outta there! None of that means Dixie's giving up the grudge, though! Too bad for her but not really, I'm loving Goldie/David. In a larger hood, dating Mr. Popularity himself could have repercussions as she tried to keep up or defend against other girls after him but so far here he's been really good for her.

Rhett's a lovable jerk, even when he was on Penny's good side that's how she saw him. His fave photo is just that one of himself but kicking and screaming into adulthood he will be dragged! Sandy's got her own issues, though, so we'll see how that goes. She and Proxy were moved in right before I moved on so I haven't seen how he interacts with the baby but I do know that during the photo shoot the second I toddler-ified Goldie both Val and Rhett were in a race to get to her. (Val won. Doesn't he always?)

Daytona and Val are weird. She's having it off with Peter, of all people, and he's, um, up to stuff. But the double-standard where he's quietly manipulating Peter out of her way is actually a function of his fondness for her. Hey, perhaps in his mind he's protecting her in some weird way from interfering with that married man? No deaths! Ever! Okay, I can't play that way here but the slow aging and shorter rotations will go a long way to keeping them around a few more rounds. I didn't get a sneak-peek at Proxy like I did with Una but I wouldn't be surprised at Hart dominance although I wouldn't mind having a girl with Sandy's unique brand of nose.
[identity profile] peni griffin on March 22nd, 2014 03:22 pm (UTC)
Yeah, it's a real shame about Sandy's nose. Statistically somebody has to get a kid with it eventually, and sometimes the rest of the face configures around the Hart nose so that it looks like it might grow up into hers during the toddler stage (at least to me. I'm not good at facial recognition, which is why the sims I make look the way they do). But so far in all the iterations I've gotten a look at, by the child stage nobody can kid themselves about it without a powerful motive.

You're the first person I've seen who've had Sandy move in with the Harts, as opposed to making a new household with Rhett or making it as a single mother in her own place, so I'm all agog, myself. This is new territory.

I reckon Valentine/Daytona is complicated because it has always been about more than just them. The very first time, the plot to make Rhett work was hatched in the pillow talk, and now Val has those grandbabies to consider. Plus, you can't keep a power dynamic out of any relationship of Daytona's! She and Valentine are both their gender's alphas, not just for their generations but for the entire neighborhood (but don't tell Rich and Lana that), and Daytona always moves to dominate in the same way she always breathes. Valentine doesn't seem inclined to dominate back, but it's not in his nature to let anybody climb over or control him.

And this is one reason why I wish I'd extended some of the elders' lives, instead of leaving them where the tides of aspiration had washed them up. Six days is barely time to enjoy Skye, while Daytona is such a mover and shaker (I don't know of anybody who's had her retire and stop to smell the grandchildren) and she leaves such a power vacuum in her wake, that her default eight days is likely to come at a bad time in the story. I trust you to deal with it. But the thought of Valentine losing another important person to the Reaper makes me sad.

One disadvantage of seeing what people do with Widespot is, that I have to watch my beloved elders (and oh! I love all of them!) die over and over and over. But I made that bed and will have to lie in it.

Sometimes I'm tempted to take one of my old backup Widespots, with Mary, Penny, Rhett, and Candy as teens and their parents as adults, and play it from there. (Mary makes an adorable teen.) Your toddler Goldie pics make me want to revert them all even further. I wish I could have been looking over your shoulder at that photoshoot!
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on March 22nd, 2014 08:05 pm (UTC)
I think the romance secondary was the clincher for me to let Sandy move in; he may not believe it but while Rhett doesn't want a wife, Sandy doesn't want to be a wife. Not his, anyway. And she's also taking refuge behind Valentine, hoping to fall off Rich's radar. Funnily enough, Rich and Lana and Daytona and Val are already in position for a sort of alpha showdown amongst the elders (their kids, even the middle-aged ones are so not ready to take over). While the conflicts overlap the teams are clear and with Rich/Lana's united front officially dissolved that leaves Lana as the wild card.

The evolution of Val and Daytona's relationship has been fun to play. Neither one of them are willing to let something like love get in the way of what they're about. While Daytona dominates, Val...finesses. He's not going to insist on much of anything but he surely will sweet talk someone into position. (Peter may be the wrong gender but he was as suggestible as any groupie.) Even when Daytona rolled an active want to get married (I let it roll away, she was just a little giddy during their date), Val intuitively rolled a corresponding negative on that. He doesn't need to say things to keep a handle on the situation...he just needs to mean them.



(Edited for typos.)

Edited 2014-03-22 08:11 pm (UTC)
[identity profile] peni griffin on March 23rd, 2014 01:57 am (UTC)
Your last statement may be the most perfect evocation of Valentine in his best versions. (He does have less attractive iterations, depending on playstyle and random chance affecting his autonomous actions.)
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on March 24th, 2014 08:58 pm (UTC)
I am awfully fond of Val, as you can tell. While he's definitely made some dubious decisions, I wouldn't know what to do with him being predatory; not just the way I see him but the way I hear him would have to change. Even playing him as he is here but in the prime of his life would be so different! I did laugh and shake my head at a pic of him and Penny in bed reblogged on your tumblr but there would be much raging and cursing at my game if I ever caught him tossing all that character development aside for a quickie with his son's first love!

Wordy stuff aside, what I actually wanted to ask about was whether Dixie was meant to be low on niceness? I checked again and she's got 8 like the rest of her sibs, that was what had inspired the 'hey, I'm nice' line because it doesn't necessarily manifest in sweetness of demeanour with her. (Pretty sure Mary's actually got 10 but I didn't check her.)
[identity profile] peni griffin on March 25th, 2014 01:29 pm (UTC)
The only ones I determined personality points on were the oldest generation (including some, like Hamilton's father, deleted in CAS after making their genetic contribution) and the adults whose character concept required them to have an extreme, or whose role required a particular star sign. I've cannibalized most of the synapses that other people devote to math in order to understand narrative better, so it's hard for me to remember numbers; but I could have sworn Dixie had like 0 to 1 nice points. I never look at personalities in play so apparently I remembered wrong. Got them mixed up with her active points. That does explain why she gets along so well with practically everybody and is the life of every party!

The only time I ever saw Val behave badly in person, where I can't subconsciously shove the blame onto the player, was when I was playtesting the subhood version, and it disturbed me profoundly. I'd attached Widespot RFD to Strangetown, and took a Beech to the Swimming Hole, where I saw a bewildered Mary attract a flock of admirers - notably Pascal and Loki, who were actively competing for her attention. Valentine appeared, swaggered over, and made out with her, scattering the lot of them; but then after the crowd dispersed, she tried to hold hands with him and he rejected the flirt! That recast the whole incident so much it made me sick to my stomach and I was glad to delete the hood. The Valentine I'm used to seeing would as soon cut his hands off as get all possessive and controlling like that.

It did, however, perfectly set Mary up to be rescued by a Curious; which, since one of my motivations for making a subhood version was to make matches between Mary, Penny, and the Curious Boys possible (Penny and Lazlo! But I can't decide whether I like Mary better with Pascal or with Vidcund), was theoretically all to the good. I hope anybody who turns up to show me their Curious matches, though, gets there by some other road than that.
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on March 25th, 2014 09:56 pm (UTC)
Penny and Lazlo! That just trumped whatever else I was going to say because it triggered a new connection to what I've done, or rather have set up to do--gah, can't tell you! It won't be this round anyway. And possibly not the next, depending on how I decide to reconcile the fact that I've been mentally phasing in some folks completely oblivious to the fact that this challenge has rules and stuff and I don't have the CAS points to afford them. I don't want them as townies and see no need for an elaborate work-around so I'll probably just add them and offset my goof by instituting a ban until I can buy the points back.

I seldom look at personalities either once the game's in motion so I was surprised to see Dixie had so many nice points or that Rhett had none. Didn't notice until I happened to see Proxy was so lacking. I've got SimPe open so taking a gander at the rest of her spread...she's going to be an interesting kid. Guess I shouldn't be surprised you were able to get such extremes like Dixie and Woody with a random roll of the genetics.

It's guaranteed that at some point I (and other players) will have these characters doing things that make you go "What? No!", if I haven't already. Hell, I do that myself with some maxis reinterpretations. But hopefully it won't be Val taking the wtf road. Can't have that. :-)
[identity profile] peni griffin on March 26th, 2014 03:43 am (UTC)
It being an axiom of game mastery that no plan survives first contact with the players, during development I actively tried to imagine horrible things people would do to these sims and if I could imagine something that I would not be able to bear to see done I wouldn't go live with it. The point of a shared neighborhood is to spark other people's fun, not to tell a particular story or impose my vision on anybody else. So go ahead and shock me. If I can stand the version in which Rhett is a rapist and Mary commits suicide (real thing real player did!), I can stand anything you'll throw at me.

As for the challenge rules - the challenge rules are there to give structure to gameplay to improve your enjoyment. Since this is a solo game, it seems to me that changing the rules as you need to in order to extract maximum enjoyment is not only not wrong, it is desirable! Think of it as tweaking the format. The sonnet is a rigid format - but at some point, somebody needed to tweak it, and now we have Petrarchan and Shakespearean sonnets, and it's all good. As long as you don't lose track of the key disciplines that attracted you to the challenge, you'll be fine. I am so eager to see who you bring in!

[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on March 26th, 2014 07:52 am (UTC)
Oh, I meant that in a "what? no! say it ain't so!" sense. The reason I'm playing it at all is because it was on MTS, which steered me toward "ooh, now let's see what I can do with this" rather than "oh, that's cute" and keeping it moving as I would've done had it been on a personal blog or something. That said, I'm drawn more to the little daily frictions so it's doubtful I'll do much that really shocks you, though I can't imagine you wouldn't be a little surprised if I did something like introduce a long-lost mother for Penny & Woody:-) But all I've seen is the sheer delight you seem to take in what other people come up with, didn't mean to imply otherwise.

The challenge is one of those things I'd read in many incarnations but never felt tempted to play until I saw Widespot. It provides the parameters for telling a certain kind of story and to that end I think it's working. When Soliamore suggested Sandy needed to get out of dodge, well, with my typical gameplay she would have that option but here she doesn't, setting the stage for more conflict. I tend to be very "rules? what rules?" and the challenge is meant to constrain their choices not mine (though that's a fine line), but I'd like to not forget what I'm playing here. At least, not so soon as Round 2! (Or try to offset the rule-breaking within the story, like Daytona's corner-cutting, but ultimately that's the real rule as it'll come down to how I work out the age-syncing whether I introduce the others sooner or later.)
[identity profile] braxen.livejournal.com on March 22nd, 2014 01:03 pm (UTC)
So David and Goldie are threebolters! That must have been a nice surprise. It was good though, that it took a little time for them to hook up, the journey there was really sweet. Not so much with the drama this time, more of a feel-good chapter. I felt very relieved that Sandy and Proxy moved in with Rhett.

And the details in your pics - the awesomeness just keeps on building. Both sims and hood start to feel real, and the way you take and arrange your pictures, I get a little "open-hood" feel about it all, a bit like "Simtopi".
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on March 22nd, 2014 07:23 pm (UTC)
That was a wonderful surprise because I already wanted them together. Dixie was only using him for kissing experience anyway and David was happy to oblige and keep his 'skillz' up. Alas, poor Woody, who will be the backup for his backup lusting now?

I did hesitate about moving Sandy and Proxy in because in my head I had planned to play out her finding her feet and starting a business, and hopefully she still will, but she wasn't exactly relishing her independence. She may come to value it more after being thrown in with this lot, though.

Drama lite, since the stakes are negligible with the kids, but I had an awful lot of fun doing this one. So glad you liked it! (SimTopi is one of those really popular stories that I haven't actually read but are on my list, like S,HWC. I always feel like I need the time to really go through them. But I definitely love an "open-hood" approach, especially for a town this small with lives already so entwined.)
[identity profile] katee412.livejournal.com on March 23rd, 2014 09:12 am (UTC)
Goldie and Dixie are so adorable together :)
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on March 24th, 2014 02:14 pm (UTC)
I think so, too. I'm surprised at just how much I love them together!