23 May 2014 @ 09:31 am
BaCC in Widespot: Round 2 - Mann  
Mann-_R2b



Picking up from Part One:



"I know where Candy's at."
8-8
"Jun—Junior told me ev'ry—ev'rything. Oh! The baby's comin'. Right now—right now, right now," she wailed.

"Mary?" Junior's voice called from inside the house.

Junior. Junior Mann. Valentine had all but convinced himself it couldn't be him and here Mary was tellin'
him...but they couldn't have that out now. Mary pushed him to go when he got her through the backdoor.
It led to a bathroom but she didn't want him to go no farther. Junior was on the other side of the other door.


B1-0
"Mary! There you are! It's time?"

"Right now—Right now, right now, right now," she lapsed back into her mantra.

B1-1
"Okay, hold on."

B1-2
She couldn't make it upstairs so Junior got her to the living room.

"Honey, c'mon, lie back on the couch."

"No."

"Mary—"

"No!"

B1-3
"Wanna be on the floor," she said.

"The floor? Mary, you can't give birth on the floor!"

"It's where, it's where I wanna be. Come on, now, help me. Please."

She was the boss. Junior didn't know what the hell he was doing but if the floor is what she needed
then he guessed the floor is where they were havin' this baby. "Hold on, honey. I gotcha."


B1-5
Mary conked out when it was all said and done. There were two of them! A girl and a boy!

It's kinda lucky she'd been on that sewing spree, the one baby's back-up got put to good use now there's two.

Lana followed her hunch to the source when she got home from work. Dinner wasn't on, Junior wasn't in front
of the television, but they were definitely home. She suspected it must've been baby time and was she ever right!


B1-6
"Twins, Junior? Really? What were you thinking?"

"Mom—"

"Well, what are their names then?"

Junior beamed as he introduced his mother to Annie and Avery Mann.

"They're definitely cute so they've got that working for them. Congratulations, Junior. Well done,"
Lana said, kissing his forehead and tousling his hair before she left him alone with his new family.


B2-0
They didn't get much sleep, Mary had to wake up to nurse the babies and both kept cryin' and wantin' to be fed at the same time.
And there wasn't much Junior could do to help with that but he only made one really bad suggestion—blame it on the crying getting to him.
It just seemed logical at the time, there's two of them and so, um, technically she could feed 'em both at the same time...he'd never heard
Mary "cuss" before, if you could call it cussing—she did. Somethin' about bein' or not bein' a brood sow? But they lived through it.

The babies ate and slept and that's all they did. Until this morning when they woke up to the mess
but Mary was on top of it, she just handed him the one she wasn't tending, same as last night.


B2-1
Lana barged in to check on them. Mary was none too pleased but she didn't say anything.


B2-2
They got the twins dressed and now it was time to go downstairs and face the brand new world.


*Unlike the Ottomas twins who got the same hair, eyes, and skintone, these two clearly did not. That's Avery
in Junior's arms, with his Mama's brown hair eyebrows and his Grandmama's brown eyes and Annie up front is the 3rd black-haired,
blue-eyed girl of the 4 girls born this generation—makes me so glad I'd changed Skye's and Penny's eyes so Una's are a different blue.
But personality-wise—why Junior, why!?! Like a pair of hyperactive slobs to wrangle is what Mary needs in her life!*



B2-4
Mary's world wasn't so brand new. She cooked and cleaned up, only now she added nursing to her routine.


B2-5
She was relieved to get a moment alone for a nice, long soak. First in a long while.


B2-8
Oh, Junior!

B2-9
"Did Daddy leave y'all in here all mad an' stinky? He do that? Don't you fret none, Mama's here now."


B3-0
They were changed and bathed and fed and one of 'em, she don't remember which, had to be changed again.

It didn't sound like much but Mary'd had a full day, not busy like she used to, but full and she was all tuckered out.


B3-1
The family came over so Mary had to hop to and fix up supper real quick.
Delta and him were the only ones like real brother and sister, she ran straight to 'im, every time.
He was gon' make such a great daddy, 'specially once Annie and Avery were big enough to play.


B3-2
Lana didn't like girls much, not ever. When Junior was born she'd been so glad it was a son, for Rich's legacy, as he used
to call it (before the school years) and for her own sanity. But this little one, she's got a bit of the Grand Mother's gleam,
hasn't she? But Annie...what a name, so pedestrian. "We'll have to find you something more suitable, won't we, little one?"

*No worries, Lana is not renaming this baby, whatever she thinks. She's also reaching
a bit since Annie is, so far, all Land. But she's the arbitrary favourite Lana chose.
*


B3-3
Lana took her downstairs and presented her to the unremarkable grandmaw.

"Now look at her! She look just like Mary, don't she?"

Mary? The woman was seeing things. Ah, there was Homer, he'd know better. Their little Annie-for-now had his eyes, after all.

"Where's the other one?" Beulah asked.

"Junior went to get him. Homer! Kids. Come meet Lady Ann!"

B3-4
Their tiny table couldn't seat the whole of the Land clan.

"Where's Scot and Dixie anyway?"

"School stuff. They had to finish up a project for Mr. Weiss," River said.

Delta didn't contradict him. She didn't understand why nobody thought to ask why he didn't have the same project to do
now he was in their class, but Junior told her a joke once 'bout how "snitches get stitches" so she followed River's lead.


B3-5
"Ain't this cosy? Cheesecake don't never fail," Beulah said to herself.


B3-7
Mary didn't hear her Mama, but she agreed. This was right nice and cosy.


B3-8
The twins started crying in unison, as was their habit, and Lana barely had time to look down
and acknowledge them before that Beulah was on her feet. Mary swooped in right after her.

They were quite the pair, the two of them, and she didn't mean the twins!
Such flaunting of the maternal instinct. So unnecessary.

B3-9
Lana was surrounded by Lands! They were everywhere. Everywhere!


B3-10
"Ready to get started on the next ones?"

"No, sir," Mary said before she even realised how much she meant it.
"Now mind you keep to your side o' the bed until they're outta diapers."

B3-11
"Yeah right," Junior laughed softly and snuggled in close.
They both fell asleep as soon as their heads hit the pillow, it
wouldn't be long before they got their synchronised wake-up call.


B3-12
For her part, if Junior and that fertile wife of his were going to insist on making
more babies than were needed, Lana would have to re-think a few things.


B4-0
Good mornin'!


B4-1
After the babies were cleaned and fed and put down, Mary set about her day, which was
punctuated by more cleaning up (after Junior) that she didn't normally have to do.


B4-5
Sandy didn't get a lot of time away from the house, it was still too cold to take Proxy out much.
But whenever she got the chance to roam out around town she took full advantage.


B4-2
"Valentine!"

B4-3
"Babysitting?"


B4-6a
Mary didn't answer telephones. Val knew that much but he still gave it a try.

Val didn't lie to Lana, he was babysitting. And now he wasn't. Bills had to be paid somehow.
He was biding his time as best he could, Candy had been gone for months, what was a few extra days?
Least he knew she was alive, didn't have to assume. She was alive and she must be safe. Junior was puttin' her up
somewhere to keep her outta the way or maybe she had somethin' on him, somethin' he never would tell Mary.

But if she knew more, if she had an address...Valentine had to find a way to
get to her without causin' more trouble for her, if he could. And if he couldn't...

B4-6b
It's not that Rhett didn't worry about Candy sometimes but Pop was stressin' him the hell out.
She'd come back when she got ready, if she got ready. That's the way she was.

Meantime, the best thing for them all was to keep doin' what they do, workin' an' playin', until
she showed up again at the door or they got that call. Then it was go time. But not before.


B4-6
"Yo, look at that. It's a cat."


B4-7
The cat made a beeline for Valentine, to hiss at him.
Must know he didn't like 'em...damn cat. What was it doin' in here anyway?

They were a pet free establishment. Was this Rich Mann's cat?

B4-8
Valentine didn't know much about Rich but he knew better than to trust him.
He wore his ruthlessness like one of those tailor-made suits of his. Crisp and pressed to perfection.

Lana never told him what happened with them and he didn't ask but the town gossip had it down to Junior's marriage.
Mary Land wasn't thought good enough for the likes of any Rich Mann and maybe Lana agreed but she sided with her son and there it was.

This was one time Valentine didn't think the gossip was far wrong; question was, how much did Rich know about his shady son?


He was that type. Only certain people mattered. And only when he said they did.
Papa would be proud if he knew his Junior took that lesson to heart.


B4-9
Surprisingly, pride has never sprung to mind when Rich thinks about his (former) son.


B4-10
"Junior, I think it's very admirable that you don't want to leave your wife alone with two small babies all day but the girl—your wife,
that is, she was bred to this mothering business and, let's be honest, you're not much help around the house, are you? But you
do have business to attend, you've done very well with the store and we don't want to lose momentum. Go back to work, Junior."

~


B5-0
This was great, there were a lot of the truckers and those other travelling-through folks actually passing through the shop!
And they weren't even anywhere near the highway so it must've been word-of-mouth. This was really a great location because they were right by
the Lands' where Beulah sold up plates of home cooking. Plenty find their way around to Valley Road for that! And they have to pass by him to do it.

*So one of these things is not like the others, but while Junior knows Peter and knows of Samantha, he's never seen her before.*

B5-1
There was Rhett. Junior knew he'd be seeing him, he hadn't been by the house at all, not since the babies were born.
But why'd he look like that?

"What's up with you?"

"Huh? Nah, it's nothing. Just thinking."

"Don't hurt yourself," Junior said.


B5-2
Pop was on him to press Junior about Candy. Like all of a sudden he had to know right now.
It was probably Mary havin' them babies that did it. Got him thinkin' about Candy and her kid.

But they'd been all up and through that house. Before Junior left to marry Mary...and live in a shack and
have to sell knickknacks—that must be some real good...well, whatever. Candy sure wasn't in the shack with 'em!
Big sis had pulled a fast one. Pop agreed. And now he was back harpin' on this Junior thing.

"Family Mann Junior. Now I know you could use a night out. One is rough enough but two? We gots to make your first shot a double!"

B5-3
Junior laughed, his first shot was a double. "Now I'm all caught up to you. Two and two, we're tied."

"Yeah but not exactly, right?" Rhett said, since he brought it up and all, "I mean, I'm behind really, ain't I?"

At first, Junior figured he was feeling guilty about Una but guilty wasn't the tone he was giving. "What do you—"

"I don't know, maybe it's different in families like yours, y'all don't count the ones that ain't 'legitimate' but us Harts, we go by the blood."

"What the hell are you trying to say, Rhett? Huh? You talkin' about my dad and me or are you accusin' me—"

"Hey, I don't know what happened between you and my sister. But I know blood is thicker than water. And I know how
to add. Mary's twins plus Candy's makes three. Or at least three I should say, since you got it like that an' everything."

B5-9b
"I should punch you right in your face."

"Whoa." Rhett took a step back. Junior could probably really kick his ass, he hadn't thought about that.

"I don't know nothin' about Candy, okay." But as he said it, Junior unclenched his fists. None of this was Rhett's fault,
it was all down to his fucking father—his father who didn't believe in blood or legitimacy or nothing else that got in the
way of him doin' whatever he damn well pleased. "I'm sorry she's gone but that ain't down to me, man. Not me."

"If not you then who?"

"How in the hell should I know, Rhett?"

"Yeah, yeah, you're right. My bad. But my Pop, I mean, me and him figured she had her reasons, she always does, but the baby...y'know."

"It ain't one of mine. I know that much."

"Oh. Oh?" Rhett laughed. "But wait, I thought..."

"Look, I told you what I know. And what I don't know. Can we let this go?"

"Uh, yeah. We can squash it."
Rhett didn't want to be at odds with Junior. He'd been avoiding this conversation and it didn't serve no point. Pop was still thinking like
Junior had Mann money or something but, whatever Junior did or didn't do with Candy back when, he sure as hell couldn't afford her no more.
"So two to two, then."


B5-4
"I think we deserve a few rounds for that."

"What, applause?"

"Hell yeah! What's wrong wit' applause? I've been tryin' to talk my Pop into puttin' a piano on
the roof when we open it up to customers for spring. I'll get mad applause, know what I mean?"

"How is it you can take anything an' make it sound dirty?"

"It's a gift, man."

B5-5
"So you gonna say you can't come out again or what? C'mon, Mary's
got your mom to help out. You can't be livin' up under them aprons."

Junior didn't know if it was a trap or not, he didn't think Rhett would do that, but his mom
had warned him to stay far the hell away from Valentine and he was taking her advice.

But everything's been so Responsibility this and Wife that. Job this and
Freakin' Father of Two that. Rhett kept askin' an' askin' and Junior wanted to hang out.

"I can't be out too late. Why don't we check out the rest stop?"

"Rest stop? What the hell for? Daytona's pit stop for them trucker dudes?"

"Yeah. Seen a lotta them comin' through today. Girls, too. It's cool, like a party sometimes
when they get to cookin' out and throwin' back the beers. I've chilled out there a couple nights."

Rhett was still skeptical.

"We could bring somethin' stronger than beer, though, if you wanna," Junior said, "If you swing by Homer's.
Girls, girls, girls," he added like he was hypnotizing Rhett. Might work. "Oh shit, heads up."

B5-6
"What?"

"Sandy, stupid. Head's up."


B5-7
"Uh, hey."

"Goldie's watching Proxy," Sandy said, forestalling any unnecessary criticism.

B5-8
"That's not what I was gonna ask. I know you didn't leave her alone, sheesh.
Just wanted to see what it was I got wrong or forgot this time."

"Nothing. I'm only browsing."

"Oh. All right then."

B5-9
"Look, I don't know what she's doing here but we're still hangin' out tonight. I'm gonna go pick up the booze, like you said.
You, I don't know, distract her or something. I mean, she's gonna see me leave but don't tell her straight out where I'm goin'."

B6-0
"Hey, Sandy..."

"Junior."

"So...long time no see."


B6-1
Zigzagging past pigs, Rhett headed to the back of the Lands' house, where the good stuff was.
Now, which kid was that? He couldn't keep 'em straight. Looked like he was on the ball,
though, and Rhett'd rather deal with him anyways instead of haggling it out with Homer.


B6-2
"Psst, hey you, kid."

"River."

"Yeah, you can tell me how much it's gonna cost if—."

"You lookin' to stock your bar?" Dixie interrupted.
She thought she saw Rhett go past a window.

"Nah, it's not for that."

"I got this," she said to River.

"Full price," he whispered, "no freebies cuz he's hot."
And River left 'em to it. He had the strangest belief all the time that Dixie knew what she was doing.

"Dix-ay."

"Hey Rhett."

"I'm just lookin' for a l'il buzz tonight, a l'il pick-me-up. You got somethin' 'round here that can, uh, pick me up?"

B6-3
Dixie eyed how far away Scot was from the window, with his nosy ass. She wasn't worried about River.
"Me," she told him.

"Eh, you're just a tease. You Land women. It's in your genes."

"I ain't wearin' jeans."

Rhett looked her up and down. Couldn't beat that logic.
"So you really wanna chill tonight? With me?"

"That's what I been sayin'."


B6-4
"Mary's doing great, you know."

"I'll never forget how thoughtful she was, you both were, to send over food and supplies when I was on my own.
Those little kindnesses...I am eternally grateful. Generosity without, well....not everyone has the knack."

"It's the way she was raised, I think. The Lands were super cool to me when I needed them, too,
so I know what you mean. Now me, I'm a selfish bastard," Junior said, laughing, "but I'm learning."


B6-5
"You should pop in for a visit one day, I'm sure Mary would love it."

"Penny."

"What about her?"

"I don't know Mary well but I do know Penny. Mary is very kind-hearted but she is Penny's friend."

"So am I. Doesn't stop me being your friend, right?"

"No, but being Rhett's friend also, being his friend first and foremost, means I know whose trust is your priority."



B6-6
Rhett wished certain folks would stop jokin' like he had a wife. The only somebody he ever asked to
be his wife turned him down cold and good thing, too! Nothin' stopping him from gettin' on with his life.

"Dix-ay. Dixie, Dixie, Dixie."

They couldn't leave her house together, o'course, but when Rhett told her how long to wait before coming to meet him
at his workplace it was mostly cuz he had to scope it out first, make sure there weren't no signs of Ottomas or Daytona.


B6-7
He led her in under the canopy of trees and stopped when he found a sweet spot.
"I was thinkin' about what you said the other night."

"What's that?"

"About how you're all, heh, grown up now."

B6-8
Dixie didn't seem too enthusiastic about his kiss...

B6-9
...but when Rhett put the moves on her, proper, she fell for it.
She was determined to fall for it.


His reputation had preceded him. So the fact that he was clearly a believer in the "withdrawal" method (and
he cheats!)
paled against the fact that he was funny and he was fun...and he was Goldie's only brother.


B6-10
And so, as it happened, Dixie was deflowered by a snake in the grass.


B6-11
It was just her luck that when she tiptoed back home her mama was up getting a glass of water.

Beulah called out, "hold up now, hold up. Dixie, you got any idea what time it is?"

"Nope."

"Now you listen up good. We still got rules 'round here and every somebody live in this house live by them
rules, even the grown folks, so don't think your birthday is some kinda excuse. Now where you been?"

"I stayed over late with Mary," she lied, "I'm goin' back there, I mean, I'm movin' in. Gonna help out with the
babies," she said and hoped that wasn't a lie because she had no idea what Mary was gonna say about her plan.

Beulah grunted. "Mary know better than to let you walk home alone this time o' night. Where was Junior?"

"Mama, it's Widespot. I'm fine."

"You go on and get some rest and we'll talk about this movin' business in the morning."

B6-12
Wasn't nothin' to talk about. Dixie wasn't Mary. She was "a woman" now and sharing this room with her little sister, living
by her parents rules and with everybody in your business all the time. Hell no. She was gettin' up outta here. Tomorrow.


~


B7-0
"Va—what are, what you doin' here?" Mary stammered when she opened
her front door to find Valentine on the other side. "Lana's not home."

"I know," he said. He wasn't about to be deterred another day, he had a pretext and
she had an empty house. "Sandy asked me to bring by this gift for you. And yours."

"Sandy did?"

Matter of fact, she did. Val was almost as surprised as Mary. "Apparently she got to talkin' to that
husband of yours and she wanted to get you something and she thought it'd be 'presumptuous' to bring
it herself when she don't know you that well but she know we, our families, been, hm, 'great friends'."

"Oh."

"It's a baby book. For writing and pasting in your memories and such. Can I come in?"


B7-1
Valentine couldn't get a fix on Sandy. She kept herself to herself, exceptin' only using Proxy as her way into, and
out of, conversation. He could not understand how that woman fell for Rhett. Tripped on him was probably more like it.

But she was livin' in Candy's room and she couldn't stay there—Rhett was gonna have to learn how to share.

"So there's the baby book for your, uh, your twins and there's also a card
in there somewhere from all us. You been so much a part of our family—"

"Thank you," Mary cut him off.

Val nodded to himself. "We didn't get to finish our talk,"he said, "With good reason—"

"Where are my manners?" she said, unintentionally echoing Lana, "I ain't fit for company,
I thought you was Dixie. I'm gon' run up real quick and get changed. I'll be back in a minute."

"No need for all that, Mary. This won't take long. I—"

"No, I better...Junior wouldn't..." Mary resisted the urge to tug at her nightgown, she knew that only accentuated...things, Junior sure
always...but she was real uncomfortable. With him in her house. And her alone with the babies. And not wearin' her right clothes.


B7-2
She barely noticed she still had Avery in her arm, he bounced right along with her, he ain't whine or fuss or nothin'.

Valentine didn't want to spend any longer in this house than he had to but Mary's modesty was one of those things about her,
it was no use fighting. He definitely couldn't follow her up those stairs and insist on having his say and come what may.

He had to wait.


B7-3
So Val went and sat down while he waited. Not on the couch she'd caught him on with Lana.
On the identical one perpendicular to it. And look what we have here. He didn't get a good look at the
one in her arms—Mary wasn't the only one who was uncomfortable—but this little princess caught his eye.

Mary hurried back down soon as she was dressed and she found Valentine holdin' her baby.

"You look better in purple," he said, "Always did."

This was too much, Mary couldn't take him standing there in possession of Annie like that.
She put Avery down and took Annie away from him.

He came with something to say, so...say.

B7-4
"I'm sick o' secrets, Mary."

She hoped he wasn't makin' no claims 'bout her babies again.

"I got no right to be here and I know it. But I need to know what you know about Candy. Everything. Where'd Junior send her to?"


B7-5
"Junior! Junior ain't—you think if Junior, I woulda still...? No. That ain't Junior's baby she was carryin'."

"Mary."

"I asked him. I asked him 'fore we got married. And he told me everything."


B7-6
Everything? What was everything? Did he even want to know?

"Who?" Valentine asked.

"Mr. Mann."



B8-0
Junior had not set foot near this house in months but he wasn't worrying about Valentine just now, he was kinda pissed off.
"Dude. You left me standing around with your fake wife like she wasn't gonna notice something was up."

Rhett wasn't tryin' to hear none o' that. Sandy was the mother of his kid and
she lived in his house but she had her own room. "We have an arrangement."

"Yeah right. Even you can't believe that one."

"No, for real. She's the one insisted. Called it a 'practical, economic arrangement'. So I was like 'deal!'
And that's all it is. If she does her thing, I don't mind. I'm-a do mine. No harm, no foul."

"But are you still sleeping wit' her?"

"Yo, you...you shoulda never got married. You're becomin' old before your time, man."

"Jus' sayin'. More babies sounds like something that might undo the no-harm-no-foul rule. But anyways, I'm here
cuz you blew me off, after you talked me into goin' out and palmed your baby mama off on me. Not cool, Rhett."

B8-1
"Aw, man, I forgot about you. Totally forgot. An, uh, opportunity came up, y'know."


B8-2
Dixie stuck by her lie-turned-decision. She was movin' out to stay with Mary. Now all she had to do was tell Mary.


B8-3
Mary was expectin' Dixie to come by, she came by a lot since she ain't had no school or nothin' no more, but
when her sister announced to her that she wanted to move in, like right now, Mary did her best to grin and bear it.


B8-4
She didn't want Dixie to think she didn't want her here but she still tried to dissuade her with the obvious.
"I don't know what Junior or Lana's gon' think and we don't have no room."

"Yeah, you do. That empty room right over where we're standin'."

"That's the babies' room."

"The babies ain't in it. Y'all got them set up sleepin' in your room. It won't be for long. I hope."

"Well..."

"Thanks, Mary."

"I still got to talk to Junior, though. And the only door to that room is through our room."

"Yeah, I promise not to interrupt when I think y'all are doin' the do."

"Dixie."

"Oh, c'mon, Mary, lighten up. This'll be fun!"


B8-5
Picking a favourite was part of the deal with a two-for-one and Dixie had decided that she was
gonna rock with Avery herself. She didn't think neither of 'em looked much like nobody yet but,
still, Avery was gonna be her main l'il dude. It was all set. Now what was wrong with his mama?



B8-6
"Pop?"

"Where you been this time of morning? I been waiting."

"I was, um—wait, waitin' for what?"

B8-7
"We're goin' to get your sister."

B8-8
Rhett knew that look. And, of course, he saw that ol' bat Pop was gripping.

"You found out, for sure, where she is?"

"No, but I know for damn sure who she's with. Let's go."

Aw hell, what was he gonna do? Rhett didn't want to jump Junior. But...he didn't really have a choice if that's what they were doin'.
He wasn't about to tell Pop that Junior had been right outside. The least he could do was stall, give him a head start.
"But where to, if you only know who?"

"Rich Mann's house."

"We snuck in there already."

"And we're goin' back. Right now. That son of a bitch. That's why he disowned Junior. Not Mary. Candy."

"Say what? His father? Aw hell no!" Rhett was decided. "We don't play that. Ain't no way she went off wit' him cuz she wanted it. Let's go!"

Valentine had already set into motion, muttering to himself, "Had the nerve to come into my
place o' business. Gloating. With that damn cat. We'll see who laughs last when I catch his ass."



B9-0
Rhett was a lover, not a fighter, but he was with his Pop on this one, 100%.
He ran back for a big stick of his own to hold but Pop didn't have any extra bats lying around so Rhett made his way to the kitchen.

"But you don't even cook," was the only thing that crossed his mind when
Valentine turned around for him to catch up and saw him brandishing that pot.

"I know but, I mean, it's heavy. Lid's stuck though. Might make a nice thud."

A nice thud upside his own head most like if Rich wasn't the only man on the other side o' that door.

They knocked first. And someone shuffled toward them.


B9-1
Candy.


B9-2
Pop grabbed her up tight.

Rhett was confused. He was glad to see her, no bruises, but why the hell were they all
worked up and she was here, flouncin' around in this big ass house, lookin' so normal?


B9-3
"Candy, get your baby and let's go. I don't know what he promised you but no.
This ain't...we'll figure it out when we get home. Where's the baby?" he asked. "Rhett."

"Come on, I'll help you get your shit and collect the kid. Just tell me what room it's in. Yoo-hoo, snap out of it, dude!"

"Just go find the baby," Valentine said to him.

"Pop..."

"Yes, Can?"

B9-4
What the—where the hell did he come from!

"You're making very free in my home, I see."


B9-5
"Whoa." Rhett practically heard his jaw snap back.
Now that's what he was talkin' 'bout. Didn't even need the bat, Pop laid him out!


B9-6
"You been makin' free with my daughter. You stay the hell away from her!"


B9-7
Rhett pitied the fool who crossed his Pop but that old dude was flat on his ass and outta nowhere
he started slowly laughing to himself. It wasn't even like real laughing, he was...kinda...scary.

"Do you want to tell him, my sweet, or shall I?"

Valentine took another menacing step forward, pushing Candy back behind him.
"You watch how you talk to my daughter," he threatened.

"Your daughter, Mr. Valentine, is my wife."


~





I was going to attempt to do something, who knows what, about that lid on Rhett's pot but it became funnier to me the way it was. In fact, I cracked myself up all through putting this one together. Could be exhaustion but anyway I hope you enjoyed it! Time is short for simming but there is still Part Three a-comin'! Thanks for reading :-D


 
 
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[identity profile] peni griffin on May 23rd, 2014 03:19 pm (UTC)
OMG OMG OMG - Candy what the hell!? I want a look inside her head. My heart actually leaped up when I saw that bat in Valentine's hand, but it is a little early in the story for Rich to get any true deserts.

Oh, Val and little girls! He just could not leave Annie alone, could he? If they mostly favor Mary he may never stop counting these two as at least provisionally his.

Mary seems to be at least trying to keep control of the situation here, and Valentine mostly kept himself in check, though the reflexes betrayed him in that edged compliment about purple. If she can just stay mad for awhile, and safely out of love with him...I'm curious, is she rolling wants to fall back in love with him? That always plagues me with the most faithful aspirations, the Fortune and Family ones - you get them all broken up with Mr. or Ms. Unsuitable, safely married and settled with Mr. or Ms. Suitable, or even Perfect, and they spend the rest of their lives with Fall in Love with Unsuitable wants popping up at awkward moments. I don't play with ACR so it's simple to avoid filling it, but they just can't seem to get over that first one in their secret hearts.

Quite the Land interlude there. Lana may not be wrong that there's a gleam of a grandmother in Annie, but she probably underestimates Beulah a lot and doesn't necessarily recognize where it came from! It wouldn't surprise me a bit if Beulah starts showing up on the lot and letting herself in from time to time - got to keep an eye on things. And something tells me she and Lana aren't going to bond over shared grandbabies.

Oh, Dixie...well, can't expect old heads on young shoulders, but Daytona or Junior or somebody needs to start stocking rubbers. Actually, Valentine should put a vending machine in his restroom at the Dugout, for the convenience of everybody. (And you'll notice I'm not even wondering about Rhett, we all know he's not thinking. Plus, she's his type - breathing.) Anyway, Dixie could actually be a help to Mary, though that is one more slob in the house. She's a lot more likely to speak up to her in-laws on Mary's behalf than Mary is, for sure, and she's not going to feel like she owes Lana so much as courtesy. But she is in the habit of being the indolent one while Mary works...well, we'll see.

Still processing, and I've got commitments for the holiday Friday I should get going on. I'll probably come back and breathe down your neck some more later, though.
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 24th, 2014 12:41 am (UTC)
More will be revealed about what the hell!

Annie definitely doesn't do much toward stopping Val from making assumptions. If Avery were a solo act he might hesitate, give Junior the benefit of the doubt, but for now, with the two of them, he's not really buying it.

Yes, that pining, even Rich has rolled a Lana want or two, although she's been far too livid to reciprocate. But Mary never actually fell out of love with Val, which works out well for me playing-wise and story-wise. She's not infatuated anymore but she still loves him. From a distance, no cluttering up her wants. Interestingly, she didn't roll any family sim revved up baby wants after the twins were born. She's content to count her blessings for now.

Lana and Beulah bonding is not ever going to happen, if either one of them have a say about that! But Lana and Dixie in the same house should be interesting. Mary having someone in her corner is never a bad thing but there's also the danger that she'll retreat behind Dixie's feistiness, leaving her to be "their" mouthpiece.

Dixie and Rhett, yeah. I may have just such a vending machine in my downloads :-) but I'm not ready to give Widespot access to reliable birth control just yet. I probably won't wait until they have a subhood of some sort as originally planned but not yet. That does mean that Hart genes could make their way into the Land family after all but that's not in my plans. If ACR and risky woohoo catch them up, I guess I won't interfere, but I won't be lending a hand in that direction.

As always, whatever crops up, bring on the commentary! I love talking about the story, as you can see; that's part of the fun. Enjoy your weekend!
[identity profile] peni griffin on May 24th, 2014 04:29 pm (UTC)
Whoa, catching Val with Lana didn't destroy Mary's love tags? That's - wow. I've never had that happen. If the act didn't nuke the love immediately, the relationship always decays enough to do it within a few seconds, usually during the follow-up conversation. I don't have any romantic mods (except the one that fixes the failure to perceive make outs as cheating, which isn't really modding), so perhaps that's a difference there. It's great character stuff, though, that meek innate stubbornness and enormous untapped capacity for love combining to keep hold of him in spite of all the reasons to let go.

I noticed here and in part 1, though, that Mary almost always looks happy in the shots with Junior. Mostly when she doesn't, it's because of something else going on - glaring at Lana, having twins. And they are managing, a lot of the time, to put together an approximation of the life she was raised to expect and wants to have. But they can't be real full partners like her parents are if she doesn't trust him enough to tell him everything and he's still letting other people supply his rudder. So one minute I'm sold on the marriage and the next I'm certain it'll break itself on a rock that should have been avoidable.

Honestly the scene that makes me most hopeful about it is Dixie standing there with her newly-chosen favorite and actually thinking, in so many words, that something's wrong with Mary. The only other person who ever thinks of something being wrong with Mary is Valentine, who with the best will in the world has almost no moves open to him, regarding her, that wouldn't be counterproductive. Dixie's already given Junior one reality check. If she ever gets Mary to open up, gets all the facts into her hands - but there's so many interruptions waiting to happen in that house! And as you say, she can't fight Mary's battles for her.

Sandy's barely glimpsed here, but she remains a wild card. If she starts rolling wants to be friends with Mary - well, they are better positioned to understand each other's troubles than anybody else around, aren't they? From Sandy's point of view, too, Mary may look like a desirable ally. She may not have anything Daytona would recognize as clout - but she has exactly those things that Sandy's lost, love and respect from a good portion of the town. To someone who thinks like a Popularity sim, that spells influence and possibilities for mutual aid that Mary can't even see.

Any idea where you got that vending machine? My Junior does a brisk business in deco condom boxes at the General Store, but I can think of some other places that could use one, in Widespot and Strangetown and Drama Acres...

I'm not surprised Rich rolls Fall in Love with Lana wants, not one bit. Those two were well-matched, and if Candy's trying to be underestimated especially he's bound to miss her. He's probably spent more time being honest and unmanipulative with her than with everyone else he's ever met put together, because there was no need to con her - they would have wanted roughly the same things, most of the time, and even when they didn't she wasn't going to try to turn against him. Until she did.

Let's see, scroll up to the top and see if there's anything I meant to say that didn't get said. Oh, good job on naming the twins! Getting Anyman and Everyman into the same birth is pretty slick. Mary cussing at Junior about being a brood sow is priceless - I bet it wasn't anything censor software would recognize as cussing, though. Has Junior actually changed a diaper yet? Being Daddy does not just mean you get the fun stuff...

I love the invasion of the Lands, making Lana feel overwhelmed and spiteful. (But when does she not feel spiteful?) Beulah knowing about the properties of cheesecake was not something I was prepared for and makes me mad at her, but it's all one with her established behavior toward her favorite child - lovingly and tenderly riding roughshod over her autonomy because Beulah knows best and what Beulah wants she gets. At least she's leaping to help with them. And I think she'll be dismayed if she's ever made to realize what she's been doing.

And I'm over the character limit.
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 25th, 2014 06:57 am (UTC)
My game is modded out the wazoo so I didn't even think about it but, yeah, it must've been because it was a casual interaction. Val and Lana are not in love; just barely, or possibly not at all, in lust (by which I mean I'm not sure if they've got the pink hearts). Their relationships with Mary took a hit, Lana's more so because it was already low, but no actual fury on her part. If I'm remembering correctly, that is. Same thing with Dixie when she caught David and Goldie together. She was largely unfazed after the fact, her relationship with David is great--recovered right away--but, again, she's no fan of Goldie's. Perhaps it's a family trait:-)

Mary is pretty happy. Junior's definitely the happiest person in that house but the only time she really came close to regretting her choice wasn't because of anything he did, it was that mother of his. And Valentine being so willing to disregard her completely, so it seemed. I'm partial to, well the look on Mary's face when she found Val at her door, but also the pic of her when Junior's caressing her face after starting to chew her out for eavesdropping in Pt. 1. (in one of the squares of 4). It's hard to be mad at Mary and Junior definitely doesn't want to hurt her but he's going to need more than good intentions.

Sandy is barely glimpsed but I didn't really intend for her to be in it at all! She did a walkby at their house and then when she showed up at the store in the middle of Junior and Rhett's back & forth I had to write her in. Especially because it's a departure for her, she's slowly becoming more willing to show her face around town (in safe, generally Beech-free, spaces) but clearly not yet ready to ditch Hamilton's old shirt...Wonder if Rhett's even noticed?

Mary's pretty loyal to Penny so that friendship may not get off the ground but Sandy and Junior are great friends! Go figure. But Sandy does need a world outside of Rhett--his family, his friends, all conditional, like they're borrowed--or she'll suffocate.

The condom dispenser is from an adult site, Pandora Sims. Got it from the booty. (Wow, in this context that sounds so dirty.) Looks like an old gumball machine. But it's not deco, I should warn you. There's a controller and tokens (and a few hilarious meshes for the dudes to use), and it's pretty old, doesn't look like it's been updated since '06. If you prefer to keep your game clean, I'm not sure if it would throw errors if the controller weren't in your folder but I also don't recall seeing any autonomous condom buying so it could actually function as deco. I generally set up the "anti-sprog devices" on pharmacy-type lots and the dispenser goes in restrooms, like you suggested (The Dugout's is unisex despite the gendered doors), or some seedier establishments, but I think it's even in one of my gift shops. Depends on the hood and/or proprietor and their attitude toward sex.

Rich acted swiftly but losing Lana had not been part of his long-term plans. Not at all. His most pointed barbs tend to be hurtled in her direction probably because he's trying to convince himself that she was past her sell-by date and he is better off without her. Candy, well, can't say too much about that situation yet. Will point out that Rhett's been inadvertently right about a few things he's said regarding big sis.

I'm rather proud of the twins' names, didn't expect I'd manage to keep the puns going. Junior hasn't changed a diaper yet, he doesn't even realise that's expected, Mary's so on top of it. That's the consensus between him and his mom, but she secretly wants to get back to the store. It's as much hers as his and she's had a 'get a job' want locked ever since she was still living "at home". Someone on the outside might not believe Mary could be Beulah's favourite but she absolutely is, it'd break her heart if she knew all the stuff Mary hid from her and that she felt like she had to. If Mary ever gets to a point where she can have an open and honest conversation with her mother, well, that will really be something.
[identity profile] peni griffin on May 26th, 2014 03:19 am (UTC)
I think Mary and Junior's eavesdropping conversation may be the saddest part of that whole painful installment. It's so small - but if this marriage fails this is the crux of why. Mary doesn't just keep a secret; she tells an outright lie about how much she heard, because she has reason to think she can't trust Junior, based on what else she heard. Junior's abandoned Candy - and what she says about loyalty to friends doesn't seem to give him pause - and he's keeping secrets from Mary - no wonder she's scared! He justifies it, this episode, too, lying to Rhett's face about not knowing who the baby's other possible father is, and the fact that he's probably not admitting to himself how bad his father is, is no excuse. At this point the fact that he's following his mother's lead only make it worse.

It's hard for me to judge how Penny would react to Mary making friends with Sandy, because my Penny is so radically different from yours, and neither her events nor her backstory are paralleled in any other iterations I've seen. But that's not even the right question. Mary'd be balancing loyalty to Penny, and how she believes Penny would react, against compassion for a woman who is in a there-but-for-the-grace-of-God position relative to her own. Plus, it's hard for Mary to shut anyone down. If Sandy came at her, woman-to-woman and mother-to-mother, that'd be hard for her to refuse, I think. It's not even impossible for her to mediate between and create an alliance of Rhett's Babymamas (before which he should tremble...) Or - oh my - with Dixie moved in - Sandy'd see Dixie as a potential lifeline straight to Virgie, wouldn't she?

Um, sorry, storymaker kicked in there...you know what I'm like.

There's always one part I keep rereading and this time it's Valentine's visit to Mary, the smooth talker suddenly almost as awkward as Woody, feeling himself in the wrong for being anywhere near her (in her nightgown for Pete's sake, he never saw her in a nightgown when they were together!) but compelled to be there by urgent duty to somebody else he loves. And then he discovers Annie and gets his mojo back, the little princess relaxing him right into a compliment that goes where he shouldn't go. But now Mary's not too flustered to talk to him either, and not only because she's dressed. It may be too much for her to see him with her baby, but it's too much in the way that drives her forward and she finally delivers her message. You did that well and elegantly. (Someday I'd like to hear them have a conversation about their lost baby; but neither of them could do that now.)

And the second thing I like to go back and look at is Val grabbing Candy up to hug her at the Mannsion, and how that whole sequence is Rhett's POV because Rhett has time to notice things other than - Candy's here and Candy's safe. Val hasn't got room in his eyes for anything other than what's necessary for full-on Daughter Protection Mode. Rhett, for once, is seeing more than his old man is.

And if it turns out that Candy really is selling herself to Rich - Rhett almost predicted that. Not all of it, though; not the part about her being handcuffed in a secret room and terrified that the baby'd have green eyes...So the scene's comic but it's fraught, too, with things that could presage interesting developments in the Hart family dynamic generally, and Rhett's character development in particular.
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 27th, 2014 04:15 pm (UTC)
Junior never got the chance to confront Candy so his dad's perspective, or his sense of it, has dominated and he's basically written her off. He doesn't like to think too much about that whole situation but his last settled impression of what happened is that Candy used him to force his dad's hand and get what she wanted from him the 'real' Rich Mann. The fact that the last time he saw her she was getting slapped around and he hasn't really thought to worry about her, except where it also related to himself, is worrying. On the one hand, he's suggestible, in that she set the tone by how she responded; on the other, he really shouldn't be! That was kind of a big deal. That selfishness he jokingly boasted about runs even deeper than he realises. He's not a lost cause but he was brought up by Rich and Lana.

The eavesdropping scene also reinforces the ways that Mary knows more about him than he knows about her. And whatever her immediate reasons, she maintains that dynamic. It will all come down to trust, whether she's capable of trusting and whether he is trustworthy, which are sometimes separate issues. Sometimes not.

Penny's backstory does give her a bit of an edge, and a blind spot, that she wouldn't otherwise have. It's going to surface later on this round. But, definitely, regardless of Mary's reservations, she wouldn't be able to out-and-out reject Sandy's overtures, if she made any. But so far Sandy's only been indirectly feeling her way, trying to navigate her new social position. She likes Junior, they have no reason not to get along, but she's not inclined to take his word for much. That ridiculousness with Rhett ducking out without so much as a nod while Junior made idle conversation to keep her from noticing or following or whatever they called themselves doing was more likely to convince her that she needs to step back from these young people altogether, find an ally more on her level if she can. Giving Valentine a gift to take to Mary wasn't only, or even mostly, about establishing an opening with Mary.

But, oh my, Penny and Sandy joining forces would be like Rhett's fantasies and nightmares combined. I can't imagine somebody hasn't done the ménage but that's one disaster not waiting to happen in my Widespot.

-Oh, hell, I've gotta dash. Too much Junior musing. I'm going to cut my last wayward paragraph but I'll probably come back to it.-
[identity profile] peni griffin on May 28th, 2014 03:14 am (UTC)
Junior requires a lot of musing here. I wouldn't take his word for anything, either. He and Rhett are about on a parr, perceptually. They're both capable of figuring stuff out, but it's not the way to bet. And it can be like wrestling Jell-O to get a grip on his character. It's composed mostly of weaknesses, and all those nice points don't do him much good without a strength to hang them from.

It's true that if Sandy wants an effective ally in this town, she needs to set her sights on an elder, and she and Valentine have Proxy for a powerful interest in common. If she can also take advantage of his tenderness toward Mary (however she perceives it) she might as well.

Valentine is the most important, and urgent, person for her to win over, but a lot of lines converge on the house next door, too: Mary for her connections and accessibility, Dixie for her position vis-a-vis Virginia, and Lana as an unaligned elder, who is nobody's first choice for an ally but beggars can't be choosers and maybe they could use each other. (How Lana would hate being lumped in with Sandy as a beggar!)

It will soon become as urgent for Sandy to find her voice as it is for Mary. She never had much of one in the grand scheme of things, and when she did speak up, it resulted in the divorce, which sent her into total eclipse. At the moment it appears that she shares this lack of voice with Candy, too. She says one word this installment, just "Pop," and it could mean anything - plea, warning, admonition. She may, of course, have plenty to say next installment so I may be wrong about that, but it looks as if Rich has managed to silence her. If Valentine is wise (and we know he isn't always) he'll insist on speaking alone with her and on getting Goldie private access to her. Rich won't be on his guard against Goldie, and she and Candy have a strong sisterly rapport. But even then, what she says won't mean as much as how she says it.

A lot's riding on Part III!
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 28th, 2014 09:13 am (UTC)
Candy's one word is exactly where I was going next! I knew it wouldn't have escaped your notice. It is meant to be ambiguous, that's what Part 3 is for, but in those first few moments Valentine is too focused on the task at hand—getting her out of there, no backtalk, for it to register right away because her silence is less of an issue for him than her not getting a move-on. It actually falls to Rhett to tell her to snap out of it. Of course, Val's also walking a tightrope because he knows how stubborn and defiant Candy can be. His unleashing on Rich is not a new twist on the way their dynamic plays out when Candy's in over her head based on how I reconfigured the scandal backstory. Rhett was too young to have had a role in that mess but his presence is necessary here. Val waited for him, he wanted Rhett with him, so while the comedy comes about because that's just how Rhett rolls, the balance he provides wasn't by accident (even if Val didn't consciously figure that into his thoughts).

Part 3 does have a lot of 'splaining to do! Although, I'm pretty sure it doesn't follow a path that's entirely predictable, at least so far as the details go. But about Sandy and Lana...that's interesting, Lana might actually need an ally even if she's not on the lookout for one. And they do already have a certain stranger in common, he hasn't been featured much since barging in on Sandy and Proxy back at the shack but there is a connection to them both. The awkwardness of those connections might not mark these two women out as natural allies but, as you say, beggars can't be choosers. Sandy wouldn't bother with maintaining a grudge against Lana for turning her away when she first needed a place to stay, Lana's had her own come-down since then, but she wouldn't pursue such an association without a bit of extra incentive. I had the vaguest ideas for them looking to the future but if Sandy did consider making nice with Lana now, as another avenue for insulating herself against Rich, just in case...hmm. In the meantime, if she made enough progress befriending Mary to be comfortable going around her house, Dixie's presence would instantly conjure Virginia, that's how she knows her. But if she were bringing Proxima around, as she would, that'd be a dose of reality Dixie doesn't want.
[identity profile] peni griffin on May 28th, 2014 09:35 pm (UTC)
It hadn't occurred to me, but this does almost exactly parallel how you interpreted the Hot Tub Dome Scandal. (Which didn't need rewriting because I deliberately included no information about it - most people assume Hot Tub + Romance Sim = Sex Scandal, but those four words could mean almost anything, and that was on purpose, because how you fill in that blank is key to how you read Val.) Candy following her instincts and thinking she's handling things better than she is, check. Predatory older man, check. Val getting the memo late, resorting to violence, check. All that's lacking is Val blaming himself for it and maneuvering to take on the worst consequences, and that may be coming up. Or Candy may derail it.

It's a good thing Sandy didn't get moved in to the Harts till their last day, as it gives you time to watch her around town (now that she's showing her face again) and gather evidence for how she plans to proceed. Moving in may have been conceived as an economic move, but it also opens a number of social avenues to her that were less open before. A homeless person approaches everyone as a suppliant; a person with a roof over her head may still be on the ropes, but she has negotiation room. (Just FYI: Aegagropilon and I decided that Sandy's maiden name was probably Shore. In case she decides to revert to it...)
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 30th, 2014 10:28 pm (UTC)
I don't think Sandy will be willing to relinquish that connection to her children any time soon, unless it happens to be in exchange for a new name, but y'never know. First things first, getting her out of those old clothes. She wasn't quite ready for that change either before I moved on to the next house, especially considering that the only options available to her would've come from rifling through Candy's closet. What a different impression she would've made showing up around town in full Candy "regalia"! (Not especially gaudy, actually, or even skimpy, but definitely conspicuous on Sandy.) Not to mention how impolitic in her position, but perhaps she'll have found something comfortable for spring by the time I swing back around.

I was going to leave her curiosity piqued but unsatisfied with her watching Val usher Mary home to give birth but Sandy had ideas of her own. Character development aside, however, the main reason I was delighted by her appearances was that I knew I needed Val back at Mary's to finish their conversation but I didn't have a pretext I liked for getting him there until Sandy popped up at their store.
[identity profile] peni griffin on May 31st, 2014 06:26 pm (UTC)
I suppose it's possible there's a few of Angel's things that it wouldn't break everybody's heart to see used again, but even if they fit, that'd be inappropriate in a whole different way and in any case she needs something that doesn't scream "mendicant in hand-me-downs." Maybe she could knit herself something that, when put together with secondhand items, would make a suitable fashion statement?

Actually, the simplest thing would be for Valentine to retrieve some of her old clothes on a visit to Daytona. Assuming Virginia hasn't shredded them all.
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on June 1st, 2014 08:22 am (UTC)
That sentence did originally read that she might knit something light for spring but I'm not so sure about that. I do love the idea of her getting some of her old clothes back, though, but I'm thinking it will be Hamilton's doing. Possibly a teachable moment for Virgie but, at least, a way of putting this all behind him. I think he's ready, or he will be, when I actually get started playing Round 3.

Edited to add: I love that idea so much I just jotted down a little preliminary dialogue. Now I'm eager to see how it plays out!

Edited 2014-06-01 08:49 am (UTC)
[identity profile] peni griffin on June 1st, 2014 03:19 pm (UTC)
That is a great idea - especially since it's something Hamilton would be doing on his own, independent of and maybe even in opposition to his mother.
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on June 2nd, 2014 09:03 pm (UTC)
I'm really fond of those small but significant transitional moments. It's important for Hamilton and Sandy wearing clothes that fit will be different going forward. And even if it doesn't serve as an invitation, the path will be clearer for reconnecting with her kids. Provided Virginia doesn't make a scene.
[identity profile] bolob.livejournal.com on May 23rd, 2014 06:29 pm (UTC)
...holy shit. That's all I gotta say about this update ^^;;;
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 24th, 2014 12:44 am (UTC)
;-) That's saying plenty!
Poor Ottomas family having to follow this act. They won't be getting up to anything nearly so dramatic.
[identity profile] bolob.livejournal.com on May 24th, 2014 12:47 am (UTC)
XD

My my...well let's hope there's some sort of 'cool down' after all this! ^^ I don't think my poor heart could take it XD
[identity profile] peni griffin on May 24th, 2014 01:31 am (UTC)
It's saying something about your hood when you got to the Ottomai for a relief from drama! (My Strangetown Ottomai just had a birth during a fire. It was pretty intense.)
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 25th, 2014 04:53 am (UTC)
Hectic to play but 100% kidnapping free!

Being the newcomers meant they were less embroiled in the town drama and so less likely to be drawn into the fallout. But we're not done with Rich and Candy & Co. just yet...
[identity profile] katee412.livejournal.com on May 24th, 2014 03:39 am (UTC)
I started this update laughing and finished it with my jaw dropped. Amazing as always!

I still really, really want to know what's happened with Candy's baby! And Dixie, well, I can't really say I'm surprised.

I may have said it before, but gosh I love how you develop all the different relationships and characters :)

[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 25th, 2014 06:01 am (UTC)
Yay, mission accomplished then!

With Val and Rhett in the mix now somebody's going to have to produce some answers about Candy's baby for sure.

Dixie, um, Dixie lives in the now. Never mind that Rhett is her best friend's quasi-stepfather; in fact, it didn't even cross her mind. He was there. Pretty much the same rationale from his side.

Thank you so much! It's one thing to know what happened just because I played it but I am really pleased with how this one came together :-D
[identity profile] nentarisims.livejournal.com on May 24th, 2014 12:23 pm (UTC)
Oh. My. Goodness!
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 25th, 2014 06:26 am (UTC)
:-D I love how consistent that reaction's been!
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[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 25th, 2014 05:03 pm (UTC)
Re: Craziness
Oh yeah, the melodrama is strong around these parts. But Candy didn't just run off and say "hey Rich, I'm havin' your son's kid, probably--mean, I think, I know it's one of y'alls; let's get married!"

Those baby-making Harts start a lot of mess they can't always (ever?) extricate themselves from with grace. :-D
[identity profile] peni griffin on May 26th, 2014 01:11 am (UTC)
Re: Craziness
It's far from certain Baby Gray Eyes is even there. If Rich assumes, or got a test that confirms (and that might be awkward to get definitively right), that this baby was his grandson instead of his son, I don't trust him not to leave that cardboard box under a bridge and lie like a rug about what he did with him.
[identity profile] hellosunnydai.livejournal.com on May 27th, 2014 03:29 pm (UTC)
OMG indeed this story is sooooo...UGH im like what the heck candy?!!!!
and for some reason i really LOVE the scene with rhett and junior at the store and the way sandy is just kinda lookin over at them.its sooo perfect idk it just made me squeal,so perfect!!!!
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on May 28th, 2014 08:47 am (UTC)
:-) Sandy wrote herself into this update and I am so glad she did! She didn't do much or say much but her showing up there made it that much funnier to me than another straight Junior-Rhett interlude.
[identity profile] braxen.livejournal.com on May 31st, 2014 04:38 pm (UTC)
I loved this chapter!! As per usual it's hard to choose what to comment on. Some really great pics in this one. That of Lana: "Babysitting?". And a couple of Rhett, with his ever optimistic, care free face. :D The staged ones at the end where super! Valentine with the base ball bat. Wow! That looked convincing (and fitting), and Rhett with the skillet. :D He he! Great! Story wise it's totally captivating. The suspense is growing for each chapter, and I really care for a lot of the characters now. But what kind of controversial love did ACR cause? You mentioned something in a comment a while ago. I guess that must come in your next update? Sometimes when you forget to finetune the settings, things might happen that you don't really care for. In my Sunnydale hood, the mother in my convent went for one of the boys when he grew into a teenager. Suddenly I heard the telltale chimes of sims falling in love and rushed upstairs to find them kissing in the bathroom. Ewww! That sure was not my intention. ;)
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on June 1st, 2014 08:08 am (UTC)
Oh, that controversial love, the one I mentioned in response to one of your updates. Yeah, ACR didn't cause that one, I did ;-) It's coming up soon but not part of the Mann Act, they've got quite enough going on. The one thing I did make sure to do, ACR-wise, was friend-zone Val and Penny. I didn't like the possibilities. (Everybody else, so far, is on their own.) How scandalous it would be if the mother in your convent were a Mother Superior! But she's not a nun at all, iirc...isn't she married? For shame! ACR left unsupervised leads a lot of sims into temptation.

The Widespot cast give great face! They hit their marks and emote like pros, even the cat—when she ran in, at a comm lot no less, and made straight for Valentine, to hiss at him...well, Poochie's been thoroughly upstaged by Doomsday's antics. But they don't know their lines worth a damn. It's all 'firby nurbs' and 'sul sul' but that's where I come in :-D
[identity profile] braxen.livejournal.com on June 1st, 2014 09:50 am (UTC)
Unfortunately, she is a Mother Superior... Not supposed to have any romantic inclinations at all, at least not that we get to know about. And most certainly not towards the children in the orphanage!! I started moving everyone the nuns met into their "friend" zone after that. I think you must be thinking of the clerical family, I've had a couple of shots of the children from the orphanage visiting them (the pastor and his wife have two children of their own).
[identity profile] quinndominion.livejournal.com on June 2nd, 2014 07:53 pm (UTC)
That's so wrong. Perhaps you could negate her attraction to men and women in SimPE as an added precaution. Sometimes that Maxis autonomy sneaks in and if she's already predisposed by this little (big) indiscretion she, or the game, might still find a way to get around her vows. Kinda funny that the nuns slipped my mind; I remember commenting when Cecily gave Spikes's daughter away but somehow it's the pictures at the pastor's house that stuck in my head. Go figure :-)
[identity profile] braxen.livejournal.com on June 6th, 2014 07:03 am (UTC)
Thank you, that is a really good idea, to negate her attraction in SimPE I mean. I didn't think of that.